Kurdish EFL Undergraduates’ Academic Writing: Discussing the Main Writing Difficulties and Potential Solutions

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Bryar Murshid Mustafa
Mohammed Luqman Shahab

Abstract

English as a Foreign Language (EFL) lecturers in the Kurdistan Region - Iraq (KRI) often report poor academic essay quality among Kurdish EFL undergraduates. The purpose of this study was therefore to determine the challenges and difficulties Kurdish English-majoring undergraduates encounter in their academic writing. Through writing 60 essays by the undergraduates in three public universities in KRI and interviewing 12 lecturers, we explored writing difficulties and potential suggestions to enhance undergraduates’ writing skills. We found that students made numerous grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors. Additionally, many of the students also struggled to write proper introduction and conclusion paragraphs in their essays. The outcomes of this article suggest that students need to read more frequently and organize their ideas for effective writing. Suggesting university programmes, various ways of teaching by lecturers in EFL classes, and writing modules were the most repetitive recommendations by the interviewees meant to enhance students’ academic writing skills. Practical implications, Limitations, further research considerations, and implications are discussed in the article.

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Mustafa, B. M., & Shahab, M. L. (2024). Kurdish EFL Undergraduates’ Academic Writing: Discussing the Main Writing Difficulties and Potential Solutions. TESOL Today, 1(1), 31–44. https://doi.org/10.53898/tesol2024114
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Bryar Murshid Mustafa, Department of English Language, Faculty of Education, Koya University, Koya, 46017, Iraq

Bryar Murshid Mustafa completed his bachelor’s degree in English language education from the Faculty of Education at Koya University in 2022. He is currently researching and working in the field of English language. His research interests are in realm of English as a foreign language (EFL) and academic writing difficulties.

Mohammed Luqman Shahab, Department of English Language, Faculty of Education, Koya University, Koya, 46017, Iraq

Mohammed Luqman Shahab completed his bachelor’s degree in English language education from the Faculty of Education at Koya University in 2022. Currently, he is a master’s student in Applied Linguistics at the same university. His research interests include academic writing, written feedback, and English language teaching (ELT).

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